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Not my bestest work, I just couldn't concentrate on it.  But it needed to be done.  I will possibly update it or redo it at some point.  *sigh*  Thanks Jason, for the idea!!

It all started with a dare.  It usually does when it comes to being bored on a Friday night.  Hayner, Olette, Pence, Roxas and Axel sat around Axel's apartment and realized they were soooo bored!!
"Let's play Truth or Dare."  Olette said.  At least it had the potential to be amusing.  
"Fine, but nobody but me kisses Roxie." Axel stated and received the customary smack on the back of his head.
"Stop calling me that!  Geez, give a rest!" the younger blonde yelled and rolled his eyes at his best friend Hayner who smirked at him.  They could all see the slight blush on his face, letting them all know, he secretly liked it.  
"Before they start drawing blood, I'll start." Turning to Pence, Hayner asked, "Truth or Dare?"
"Truth."
"Would you kiss a boy?"
"No.  I leave the boy kissing to you and Roxas. Sorry." smirking, Pence glanced at Olette and blushed a little, then glanced at Axel.
"Okay Axel, Truth or Dare?"
"Ummm Dare."
"I dare you to sing 'Material Girl' for next weeks trip to karaoke."  Everyone laughed, as Axel grimaced as though in pain.  The boy did not like Madonna!
"Alright.  Roxie, Truth or Dare?" He leered at his boyfriend, somehow making the question seem dirty.
"Truth."
"Who was your first kiss?"  Despite dating for two months, Axel had never gotten the courage to really ask about Roxas's past love life.  To tell the truth, he was sorta afraid of what he might learn.
Throwing his head back a little as he laughed, Roxas answered, "Hayner."  And continued to laugh at the shocked looks all around.  Snuggling close to the red-heads chest, he nuzzled his neck and tried to reassure him.  "We were 12, Axel.  Relax."  Still dumbfounded, Axel just nodded.  
Roxas turned to his best friend, and inwardly clapped his hands with glee.  He had been hoping to play this game with Hayner.  He had a special dare planned just for him.  Knowing the blonde usually chose Dare, he crossed his fingers and asked, "Hayner, Truth or Dare?"
"Dare of course."  Hayner was positive it would be something along the lines of Axel's dare, and didn't really mind belting out ridiculous songs when everyone else was drunk.
"I dare you...to find out what color Seifer's underwear is for the next 10 days."  
There were collective gasps all around the room.  This was a dare, to top all dares.  Hayner opened his mouth to protest, and shut it when he saw the look on Roxas's face.  He knew!  That little shit knew about his crush on Seifer!! Promising himself he would get Roxas back for this, he sighed and said, "Fine, since you're so curious about his underwear, I'll do it."  

Day 1

"I can't believe I'm doing this!"  Hayner hid behind his hands with his head on the table.  It was the following monday at lunchtime and Hayner didn't really have a plan on how to go about finding the information.  While they no longer fought everyday, him and Seifer were not on the best terms.  Seifer was still arrogant and snotty, and Hayner was still childish and petty.  Besides shooting each other smirks or rude gestures, they avoided each other.
"Well, you've got gym today, so today should be an easy one."  Roxas smirked.
"That's right?" Jumping up when the bell rang, Hayner ran to start dressing for gym.  Seifer was usually there first and was always the first on the field.  Peeking around a set of lockers, Hayner could see Seifer getting undressed.  Realizing that in order to not look extremely perverted, he would need to do a walk by.  Closing his eyes and stealing himself, he started walking slowly toward the other boy without looking at him.
As he came up to him, Hayner let his eyes slide over Seifer's form.  He took in the chiseled abs, the slightly tan skin, and the deep blue boxer briefs that hugged Seifer's delicious lower region.  Hayner didn't even realize that he had stopped walking and was creepily staring until he heard a rather annoyed voice say, "If you don't stop staring at me like a big mouth bass, I'm gonna feed you your own gym shorts."  Snapping his eyes up, he met the smirking face of Seifer.  Blushing, Hayner forced his eyes forward, and all but ran to his locker.  
"Stupid, Stupid, stupid!"  He banged his head against his locker.  Closing his eyes, and hoping to burn that beautiful image in his head forever, he reached into his pants and texted the word, "dark blue" to all his friends.

4 pairs of eyebrows raised as they opened their phones.

Day 2

After spending part of last night coming up with different ways to find out Seifer's underwear color, Hayner had 3 fool-proof ways to get his ass kicked.  
1. Pants him (then recover in the hospital)
2. Fight him (odds are good for a brief glimpse)
3. Ask him??  Tell him about the dare, then hope he doesn't kill me.

Sighing as he trudged home from school, he was grabbed and shoved painfully into the nearest alley wall.
"What. The. Fuck!" He snapped.  His heart dropped like a rock into his stomach as he came face to face with icy blue eyes, a scar and a pink tinted Seifer.
"Lamer, you have exactly 8 seconds to give me one good reason why I caught you staring at my crotch yesterday." His icy tone was not as sharp as Hayner was expecting, and gave him a small bit of courage to just come out and say it.  Immediate death was more desirable than a slow and painful one.
"Alright.  It was a dare, okay?  Roxas dared me to find out what color of underwear you have on for the next 10 days." He dropped his eyes and blushed, hoping Seifer wouldn't connect any dots.
When there was no immediate response, Hayner glanced up and saw the strangest look on the bully's face.  Seifer was blushing!  Now, really intrigued, Hayner saw confusion and what looked like embarrassment play over Seifer's face.
"So, umm..then what was your brilliant plan to find out for the rest of the days?  I am assuming you let all your lamer friends know about my blue ones yesterday."  Seifer felt like he was missing some important link in the story and needed more insight.  Why would Roxas, who at this very moment was probably shagging the red-head, want to know what color his underwear was?  And why ask Hayner?
"I thought about pantsing you, or starting a fight, but I didn't really have a plan."  Hayner couldn't believe he was still having this conversation.  He was less than a foot away from his crush, talking about a dare involving said crush's underwear!
"Brilliant lamer.  Real genius thinking." Seifer mocked.  Seeing the blush that was still spreading, Seifer slowly realized that the dare didn't have anything to do with Roxas, but with Hayner.  Hayner wanted to see what color his underwear was!  Peering closer to the younger blonde, he got the distinct impression that he had a crush on him.  'Hmm,  I'm gonna have fun with this.' The older blonde thought to himself.
"Well, I'm am gonna help you out of the goodness of my heart," Hayner snorted, "That way you can knock that little brat down a few pegs."  
"Really? Well, thanks, I guess."  Unsure about this sudden helpfulness, Hayner waited.
"So, are you going to tell me what color they are or what?"
Grinning, Seifer slowly brought his hands down to the bottom of his shirt.  Pulling it up with one hand and he put his other hand at the top of his pants.  Hayner's eyes widened and he unconsciously gulped as Seifer pulled his pants away from his body and down a little.  Creamy white skin stood out and Hayner got a glimpse of grey before Seifer pulled his shirt back down.
Leaning in and almost touching noses, Seifer whispered, "Same time tomorrow." and he walked off.
Feeling extremely hot and bothered, Hayner pulled out his cell phone and shakily typed 'grey' and sent the messages off.

Day 3

Trying to convince himself to not appear too eager, Hayner went to the same spot after school and waited for Seifer to show up.
"Gee, if I didn't know any better, I would say you were eager to see into my pants,"  a voice drawled.
"I just want to get this over with jack ass." Hayner scoffed.
"Yeah, sure."  Seifer was perversely pleased to see the blush on Hayner's cheeks and was looking forward to driving the younger blonde wild.  
Hayner looked up and saw Seifer stalk closer and closer until they were less than a foot apart.
"Can I help you with something?" Hayner asked eyebrows raised.
"Just wondering what color your underwear is.  I mean, you get to know all sorts of things about me, but I'm not getting anything from this.  So let's just check and see what Hayner's rocking down there."  
Unprepared for this sudden shift, Hayner could only numbly stand there as Seifer slowly brought a hand to his pants and pulled them out and away from his body.  
"Oh, I see.  Black is pretty universal right?"  Seifer stifled his disappointment.  He thought maybe Hayner went commando.
"Okay, now that your curiosity is satisfied, what color are yours?" Hayner could tell he was red as a tomato and tried not to moan as Seifer pulled back a little.
"Go ahead and find out lamer."  Seifer smirked.  Come on little fishy, take the bait.
Hayner looked into the amused eyes of Seifer, and gulped.  After the space of a few heartbeats, he slowly brought his hand up to the top of Seifer's pants.  Knowing his face was glowing even brighter, Hayner slowly tugged Seifer's pants down a little and marveled at how beautiful his skin was.  Gulping, he slowly pulled his pants and leaned forward to catch a glimpse of white before his courage failed him and he let go and jumped back.  
Seifer stepped forward and had Hayner backed up against an alley wall before Hayner could even get his scattered thoughts collected.
"You owe me one, lamer.  I'll be looking to collect."  With that, Seifer headed home, once again leaving Hayner with tight pants.  
Sighing, he sent out his text message.

Day 4

"I hate this!"  Hayner whined.  Olette rolled her eyes at his dramatics, and rummaged around her bag for her lunch.  
"Quit whining!  Gosh, we all know you want to see inside his pants already, so just jump him!"  She snapped.
Shocked at her tone, he closed his mouth and resolved to stop talking to his friends about his obsession.  Olette could be fierce when she wanted to be, and no way did he want to get on her bad side.  Grimly, he decided that the best thing to do was just go along and if he failed in the dare, he failed.  It would blow over eventually.  He hoped.

Besides, he had gym again today, so he could just catch a glimpse without too much trouble right??

"Lamer, I swear the next time you try that, I will seriously end you."  A blushing Seifer was clutching his gym shorts because Hayner had 'accidentally' tripped and grabbed onto him.  Mission accomplished, however, as he caught a flash of maroon before Seifer saved his shorts.
Grinning up at him, Hayner patted himself on the back.  Now he didn't have to worry about getting cornered again after school.

Lifes a bitch though, and he felt the familiar shoulder grab and the familiar feeling of the alley wall behind him.  Hoping to escape with minimal damage, Hayner just relaxed and met Seifer's angry gaze.
"What. The. Fuck. Blondie?  I thought we had a deal.  I help you out, and you stop secretly trying to see my underwear in school?"  Seifer hissed.  
"Well, I saw an opportunity, and I took it.  We done here?"  Hayner was pleased his voice didn't crack.
"No.  We're not."  With that Seifer brought his lips crashing into Hayner's.  Beyond surprised was his first reaction, followed by every hormonal teens  reaction.  He closed his eyes and kissed him back!  Seifer felt Hayner bring his arms up around his neck as he circled the younger teens waist to deepen the kiss.  Running his tongue along Hayner's bottom lip, he asked permission to continue.  Moaning, Hayner opened his mouth and felt Seifer's tongue invade his mouth.  
Pulling back too soon, Seifer smirked at the how damn sexy Hayner looked just kissed.  Flushed, lips swollen, and eyes half closed.  Deciding to make this something he wouldn't forget, Seifer leaned into Hayner's neck and bit down at the junction where shoulder met neck.  Almost losing it when he heard Hayner moan loudly, Seifer proceeded to leave a hickey claiming him as his own.  He pulled back and nodded, satisfied with his work. He took a step back and snapped his fingers in front of the dazed teen.
"Earth to Hayner!  Just remember our deal.  See ya tomorrow."  He smirked and left.

Hayner couldn't even begin to understand what just happened.  Still dazed, he brought out his phone and sent his faithful text message.

Day 5

"What the hell is that on your neck?!"  Roxas yelled the next morning on the way to school.
"What the fuck does it look like?"  Hayner said shortly.  It was too hot to wear something to cover up the hickey, and he realized he really didn't care.  He wouldn't deny what it was.  Just who gave it to him.
Noticing that his friends had stopped he turned and saw their questioning looks.
"What?  It's nothing,  I don't want to talk about."  With that he headed into school.  

After receiving looks and snickers all morning, Hayner decided to skip and go home early.  However, he did not count on once again being cornered in the alley by Seifer.  Did that guy have some sort of 'Hayner Radar' or something?  More likely, Olette had told him he was ditching.
"What now?  I gave up the dare. Happy?" Having decided that, he just wanted to go home and not embarrass himself anymore.
"Why?  I thought we had a deal?"  Seifer was confused.  What was Hayner's problem?  It seemed like he enjoyed kissing him, so why all of a sudden was he running away?
Hayner didn't answer.  He ducked his head and felt his face turning red.  Yeah, he wanted to continue.  He wanted to have more chances to see into Seifer's pants.  But not on a dare.  That made it less real or sincere somehow.  
"Lamer, I'm gonna fuckin' kiss you right now, and dammit if you don't tell me to stop, I won't."  Meeting Hayner's eyes, Seifer saw confusion, but excitement too.  Crashing their lips together, Seifer let all of his feelings pour into that kiss.  Frustration, desire, excitement, love....Wait? Love?
Groaning, Hayner kissed him back just as forcefully.  He didn't want this to stop, but he knew if they continued, they'd be arrested for public indecency.  
"Seifer, hmm, we have to stop."  Panting as Seifer continued kissing along his jawline and neck, Hayner tried to push the older boy back a little.
"Hmph, what lamer?  I'm busy."  Seifer ground his hips into the smaller boys and was satisfied by the bulge he felt there.  Catching Hayner's lips in another kiss, Seifer developed a rhythm of grinding.  
Pushing his hands harder against Seifer's chest, he finally succeeded in getting Seifer off of him.
"We can't do this here.  We're gonna get arrested you idiot!"  Hayner yelled.  
"Fine.  Come on, we're going."  Seifer gave him one last kiss, and grabbed his hand.
"Where are we going?"  
"My house.  I'm not done with you yet, lamer."  Shivering at the promise in Seifer's voice, Hayner just nodded.
"I'm on top."  He said.
"In your dreams, chickenwuss."

'1 new text message'
'commando'


I just couldn't get this the way I wanted it.  Shout out to my cousin, psychoticmilkman for the awesome idea.  Wish I could have done it justice=)      
Enjoy the greatness that is Seiner!!!
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WhatAmItoYou's avatar
Great! If you made it really last the ten days then that'd be even more amazing, lol I knew the last day would be commando! Haha incredible